Tuesday, October 18, 2011

Found Face Story- PIA
































                      
      A long time ago, there lived a hero named Pia. He lived up on the mountains away in a tribe. Ever since he was a kid, he was made fun of his long nose. Now let's go back in time when all of this changed.
      On a cold, foggy, silent morning of November lived a family of five, but then the silence broke. The tribe of Axiom gathered around the cave. The chief :Bayani went out to greet the tribal members.
     "Come up everyone. My wife Cecelia gave birth to a healthy baby boy." Then applause broke out and cheers too. Now finally there will be a heir to the secret treasures beyond. Where only the worthy is able to see.
     Once the ladder was put down everyone climbed up to see the precious boy. Then a scream broke out. The chief pushed the woman away and noticed his baby son very pale and his nose abnormal. He demanded to know who did that. All there was, was silence from everyone. Bayani told everyone to leave. Right after the last person left he noticed his wife was very pale.
    The next day, news came that Cecelia had passed away after giving birth to her son: Pia.All three girls and Pia now lived up in the mountains with their very depressed dad.

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    Years passed, Pia now age 16 went down to talk to the other boys. Once he showed up to talk, the boys just turned around and started making fun of his very long nose. He even noticed that his best friend: Amon was talking to the people that were both of their rivals since they were young. 
     "What are you doing?" Pia asked to Amon.
      "Talking to my friends.What's it to you?"
      " You know what, never mind!" Then Pia marched off very angrily.
      Not noticing the way he was going, he ran into the girl of his dreams: Eleni. She got up as fast as she can, looking like she didn't want to be seen with him.
      "I am sorry." Pia said very absentmindedly just looking into her blue radiant eyes.
       She didn't even reply all she did was scoff at him.
      A hurt Pia, went back to the mountain home. He looked inside and no one was home. So he wouldn't get in trouble with his chief dad, he went to his section of the mountain to practice his bamboo flute for the marriage of his eldest sister, Iris. He enjoyed playing the flute but not when he was forced to do it though. When he picked up the flute he could not stop thinking about Eleni, then he woke up from the reverie when he slipped and made a sour note.
    "Well.. I know the best thing to get my mind off things.." he thought to himself.
      After grabbing his fishing pole from the door of the house, he went down the rickety ladder to Lake Da. In his smock he wore he felt around and found some juicy worms from 2 days ago he bought at the shack. Excited, he went to the dock and got out the family canoe, old and wear down of brown paint. Pushed himself off the shore casting his line into the blue clear water.   
     An hour later, Pia after catching two fish felt satisfied. Rowing slowly, he saw the figure of Linnea his sister that is short for her age. He got off the canoe and put it back underneath the dock.
      "What's up, Linnea?" he asked.
       " Dad said the ceremony is starting soon, come on change out of your clothes." she said.
      Running back to the mountain, he hastily put on his nice poncho with leather brown buttoned up pants. Upon finishing Pia grabbed his flute and notes to look over for. Then started climbing down the ladder to meet his dad and Linnea. As it seems that Acacia his second oldest sister is supposedly the Bridesmaid to Iris.
     Once Pia arrived to the landmark for the wedding, it was filled with tons of people making him more nervous to do his part in the music. He knew while he was walking that his friend Amon was supposed to play the drums along side for the ring exchanges. Fortunately he was not there, as you know he is still mad at him for all that.
     Then there was tap on his shoulder and turned to see that it was his father telling him that it was time to get ready. He nodded and went up to the front of the stage. While walking through the aisle he noticed Eleni looking lavish in a nice purple tie-dyed traditional dress, as she is just there for her cousin, Enix who is marrying Pia's sister. Looking red in the face, he sat down on the mat and was getting ready to start. Then he heard a faint snickering noise that sounded oddly familiar. He looked back and noticed nobody was there.
    When he turned back to the audience, the ceremony was beginning. Looking over all the emotional and happy people he looked over to the first row, right-side and saw that the seat that was supposed to be occupied was gone.
    "Something must have happened" he thought aloud.
      Not knowing what he was thinking he got up, with his head pounding with anxiety. All around him he heard murmurings and angry remarks. Then he heard the heavy-set footsteps he is all too familiar but just started running faster all the way into the woods.
      Then, a faint scream was heard in the distance due North. He followed it until he saw the person you would least expect. Amon. Amon was just conversing with what looked like his older brother, Zorak about the treasures beyond. Behind the bushes, he saw Eleni tied up to a tree looking so pale and sad. Anger showed the most on her face.
       "What are we going to do with the girl?" Amon indignantly asked.
       "We just need to get information from her and then she will be set free." he said.
       " Where is the secret treasures beyond, you can not lie because you know where it is. " Amon asked angrily to Eleni.
      She just pursed her lips and shook her head no. She never knew about the treasure it is only the heir of the chief that knows. So why would they ask her then?
      After a long silence, impatience came from the two brothers, both of them were contemplating what to do to her to make her talk. Then Amon plucked his head up and turned toward where Pia is.
     "I know you are there, Pia. No need to hide. Just come out slowly and you will see what will happen to your girlfriend."
     "How did he find me out?" Pia thought aloud.
      Pia slowly came out from the bush, with a disgusted look on his face at his friend.
     "Why did you do this?" he expressed with agitation.
     "Only for the treasure that is rightfully ours! You do not deserve to get the treasure at all. Why did your father all of a sudden become chief of the Axiom? Not by blood of course. Who else would cause this flaw to come upon you nonetheless my father!! I could explain but I am losing patience with you." Amon remarked boastfully.
    "Oh no, you don't." Pia exclaimed.
    Then face-to-face was Pia and Amon fighting for their fathers but most importantly the heir of the treasures beyond. As a 16 year old boy you are required to learn self-defense against the enemies you meet.
   Two to one. Both brothers have the strength and will to do it. With all focus on the enemy. You can only faintly hear the excitement of Eleni breaking loose of her bonds.
   Right when blood was coming from both sides, appeared Eleni with dagger in hand. Poised at the two brothers their eyes popping out of their heads.
  "Listen to me! I am really angry with what you two did." she pointed with her fingers.
  "No point of you three to fight just for your father's justice! Now step back or someone gets hurt, you all know I am equally trained as much as you three are."
    Pia thinking he should listen stepped back and so did Amon. But of course the rebel had to be Zorak.
   "You are not the boss of me at all, I am much older than you! This is for my father. Nothing will stand in my way!" He was just about to pull out his dagger that was much longer than her own. When.. an object flew.
    BANG. Down went Zorak with eyes rolling back in his head. Amon went down on his knees with pure anger towards the girl.
   "YOU", he said red in the face. "This is payback now." He was about to go up to her when Pia stepped in front of her.
  "Don't mess with her, if you kill her there will be consequences bigger than her own she will receive now, just walk away. Or else, I will allow one more killing to be successful!!" he stated.
   " You know what? I will get my revenge. This is not over, you will see." Amon replied.
     Once Amon backed up and ran away. Pia looked back at Eleni. Then she looked up and smiled. Ever since then, Eleni had a new respect for Pia. Despite his flaw. They walked back into the sunset with dreams to be accomplished.



  
      

1 comment:

  1. Wow! A lengthy story complete with dialogue.

    This caught my eye initially because I'm unsure where that face came from.

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